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(Verse) (Rap)

I'm not a man who credits God

for everything

like building my strength due to all my pain

whatevers my fault I'll take the blame

My god is amazing he's more than a friend

he don't give a gift, take it back in the end

Some of my peeps just don't understand

life is a game, a strategy plan

you fail at your goal, you're on a roll, you don't care no mo'

God is not the blame for the burdens you bare though

We make our way by choices

we choose

he's not to blame for pain we go through

(Rap)

I've been detested

said I'ze outa line

a false arrest

no proof to the crime

locked behind bars

a very long time

with murders n' rapist

in a world unkind

During court the judge turned to me

he said give your reason state your plea

I'd just praised my Lord 

N I'z feelin' fine

so sticking to my faith

I stated my line

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

Satan gets the credit for the burdens I bare

another 6 six months this time no bail

can't cuss and fuss cause it's Satan I'll hail

(Chorus)

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor the worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Rap)

He's out to push you to your brink

till you cut off the Lord and give thanks to him

(Verse) (Rap)

But I've been there

I've played that game

It's got me nowhere

but a firey flame

and when I'm guilty

I'll take the blame

and when I've done nothing

their records claim

I'll praise my Lord

N I'll feel fine

sticking to my faith

N stating my line

(Chorus)

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

N Satan gets the credit for burdens I bare

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

Hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Different Rapper)

I've been broken down many times

seeking out dollars, only finding dimes

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

(rap)

I've lived my life

I've played for keeps

no holds barred

Cause I was weak

weak to sin

with a strong man's core

I let the devil in

didn't care anymore

(Woman sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given choices , he'll lead the blind

(rap)

People coming up an telling me

give God a chance, it's who you need

(1St rapper)

I did my part

I fought my war

from hell and back

I shut that door

Now I'm shot down for my belief

But my Lord is real, he's who I seek

(Female sings)

Hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

Satan gets the credit for all burdens I bare

(Repeat chorus)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

Hold your ground leave your worries behind

These are  trials from the signs of the times

 

 

 

 

 

 

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4 minutes ago, Summer Days said:

(Verse) (Rap)

I'm not a man who credits God

for everything

like building my strength due to all my pain

whatevers my fault I'll take the blame

My god is amazing he's more than a friend

he don't give a gift, take it back in the end

Some of my peeps just don't understand

life is a game, a strategy plan

you fail at your goal, you're on a roll, you don't care no mo'

God is not the blame for the burdens you bare though

We make our way by choices

we choose

he's not to blame for pain we go through

(Rap)

I've been detested

said I'ze outa line

a false arrest

no proof to the crime

locked behind bars

a very long time

with murders n' rapist

in a world unkind

During court the judge turned to me

he said give your reason state your plea

I'd just praised my Lord 

N I'z feelin' fine

so sticking to my faith

I stated my line

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

Satan gets the credit for the burdens I bare

another 6 six months this time no bail

can't cuss and fuss cause it's Satan I'll hail

(Chorus)

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor the worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Rap)

He's out to push you to your brink

till you cut off the Lord and give thanks to him

(Verse) (Rap)

But I've been there

I've played that game

It's got me nowhere

but a firey flame

and when I'm guilty

I'll take the blame

and when I've done nothing

their records claim

I'll praise my Lord

N I'll feel fine

sticking to my faith

N stating my line

(Chorus)

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

N Satan gets the credit for burdens I bare

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

Hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Different Rapper)

I've been broken down many times

seeking out dollars, only finding dimes

(Female sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

(rap)

I've lived my life

I've played for keeps

no holds barred

Cause I was weak

weak to sin

with a strong man's core

I let the devil in

didn't care anymore

(Woman sings)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given choices , he'll lead the blind

(rap)

People coming up an telling me

give God a chance, it's who you need

(1St rapper)

I did my part

I fought my war

from hell and back

I shut that door

Now I'm shot down for my belief

But my Lord is real, he's who I seek

(Female sings)

Hold your ground, leave your worries behind

these are the trials from the signs of the times

(Rap)

God gives life and the beauty that we share

Satan gets the credit for all burdens I bare

(Repeat chorus)

These aren't the best nor worst of times

God has given signal, the devil's alive

Hold your ground leave your worries behind

These are  trials from the signs of the times

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is my first attempt at Christian Rap, inspiration Flame featuring Decemberadio, give me all your comments, good with the bad. I did purposely misspell some for smoother flow. I, myself thought it sound better.

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I just love this and big wishes that you have a music track in mind to match. It's so cool i don't feel like even looking at it to critique :) 

Peggy

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22 hours ago, Summer Days said:

he don't give a gift, take it back in the end - -  he don't give a gift to take it back again

just a thought 

 

joihn

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17 hours ago, Peggy said:

I just love this and big wishes that you have a music track in mind to match. It's so cool i don't feel like even looking at it to critique :) 

Peggy

Thank you so much Peggy. This was my first attempt of this genre. I thought maybe too long n possibly needed lots of rewrites. Thanks for your kind words.

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