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Need Co-writer for half-written song

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I'm currently writing a song and I need someone to help me out finding out good lines and such.

The song is a simple, generic song about losing a person due to an abusive relationship. I would like to work with anyone and create a great project.

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I would totally like to work with you. 

 

Let's see what you got :)

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@BlazingAce

 


[VERSE 1]
1;I remember
2;who we were
3;I should've known
4;That you'd leave me alone
5;Now, it's just me
6;And it's very hard to breathe
7;having to watch you leave

 

[VERSE 2]
1;This wasn't how it had to end
2;Sorry, for what I would say every day
3;it was never meant to scare you away
4;I never intended to offend you
5;I hate the person I had to portray
6;I wish you would stay
7;Please, don't go away.

 

[VERSE 3]
1;I remember
2;who I was
3;You meant the world to me
4;I don't know I let this come to be
5;Because, I never meant
6;to make you cry
7;I never wanted to hurt you
8;I didn't see that by hurting you
9;I was killing me

 

[BRIDGE]
I wish I had the chance
to undo everything
I did you to.
Erase the hell I put you through,
but it's too late
Now, you're gone.

 

There's all this. It's not perfect, it's my second lyric I've ever written.
Let me know what you think and we can start working together.

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Do you have music with this?

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@j4ckr4bb1t

I was working with someone that was making the music for the lyrics but, he disappeared.

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Do you have a tempo or style of music that you are aiming for with this?

 

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@j4ckr4bb1t
Based on my old composer dropping, I have decided to tweak the song a little in order to fit it with a 80-95bpm melody.

 

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Do you a melody or are you wanting that part fleshed out? Should it sound like Bob Dylan or Metallica or what?

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