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Lyin' (Studio Version)

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Beant Singh    9

Hey guys new song! Any critique would be appreciated. Again, I went for a chill/cloud rap vibe. 

 

Lyrics: 

 

They be lyin when they talk;

They be lyin when they talk;

Lyin when they talk;

They be lyin when they tallk;

Lyin when they they talk;

They be lyin when they talk;

 

On the gram they be posting; 

But I know that its nonsense; 

 girls photoshopping rappers they be flopping; 

When I flow there's no stopping; 

These rappers they are dodging: 

Saying that they're trapping; 

But they're fake... No ones clapping; 

I am walking I am running they be talking they be Bunning; 

But they're fake and they know it cause they ain't on nothing; 

They be lying about my history; 

Keeping that away from me; 

They're leaving me blind; 

So now I cant survive; 

 They be lying when they teach; 

They be lying all week; 

They wont tell me the truth; 

Keep me from my roots; 

They be fasting all month then eat pork when its done; 

Tell you off for haram but they don't do halal; 

 

 

They be lyin when they talk;

They be lyin when they talk;

Lyin when they talk;

They be lyin when they tallk;

Lyin when they they talk;

They be lyin when they talk;

 

This is more than fun I just burnt my tounge; 

Spit fire from my lungs guess I'm burning 'em; 

Give me beats; 

 ill murder 'em; 

Walk streets in Birmingham with a turban on and fit right in like I'm part of 'em; 

We're all one I don't part with 'em all my boys got heart in 'em; 

They're permanent there's no hurting 'em; 

The best of them dont depend; 

Just pray to god that's medicine; 

I'm blessed to be from Leamington; 

We ain't peddling but still feds meddling; 

Give us problems like we're menacing; 

We're just working tryina get some money in; 

Tryina get a million apparently I look militant; 

Not intelligent but I'm trying write like im tennyson; 

I'm heaven sent I'm ready son if you wanna go we're battling; 

MCs need to listen to what I'm tellin em; 

MCs hate enemies talk about shellin em; 

I filter out their lies like sediment; 

I'm adamant I'm shelving em keep your bullshit to the mimum; 

Think your powerful Ozymandias; 

Your reign will fall just check the script: 

Looking at me all envious; 

You know I'm like Odysseus; 

They miss this shit a true lyricist who's bringing it; 

 

 

Edited by Beant Singh

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Mahesh    479

Hi Beant, 

 

I don't see a link to the song. Since you mentioned Studio version, I'm assuming you forgot to add it in. :)

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Beant Singh    9
1 hour ago, Mahesh said:

Hi Beant, 

 

I don't see a link to the song. Since you mentioned Studio version, I'm assuming you forgot to add it in. :)

Lol, seems as though I forgot to add it- thanks for letting me know. I edited it in.

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The song has a cool wavy feel to it. I think the chorus might need a little work as far as your pitch. Your rapping has a good bounce to it I would just try to put a little more emotion and confidence into the verses so it doesn't sound like your reading it. Overall the track isn't too bad keep pushing and always work to improve you are on to something. 

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Beant Singh    9
1 hour ago, Sunni Meringue said:

The song has a cool wavy feel to it. I think the chorus might need a little work as far as your pitch. Your rapping has a good bounce to it I would just try to put a little more emotion and confidence into the verses so it doesn't sound like your reading it. Overall the track isn't too bad keep pushing and always work to improve you are on to something. 

Thanks man! My delivery is something I'm constantly trying to work on. I think because I am literally reading off a phone it loses something. Often when I freestyle off the top it sounds a lot more passionate - I guess it's about bringing that same energy to written verses. Thanks!

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