Drake 2.0 Rap

[Tjbenz]

Let me know what you guys think. 2nd verse is dedicated to my mom. Thanks 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7npDntkABE

[Force]

It's very well produced, but you don't drag out your rhymes enough. Like the rhymes are good, but you should really give them a couple more lines a piece. For example, your second verse was just getting going and getting momentum when it ended. You also really rhymed "ain't enough" with itself a lot more than I'd have liked, but your other rhymes were actually really good.

 

 

[Tjbenz]

On 8/16/2017 at 2:20 AM, Force said:

It's very well produced, but you don't drag out your rhymes enough. Like the rhymes are good, but you should really give them a couple more lines a piece. For example, your second verse was just getting going and getting momentum when it ended. You also really rhymed "ain't enough" with itself a lot more than I'd have liked, but your other rhymes were actually really good.

 

 

Thanks man I really appriciate the feedback. Anyone else have critique?

[Poet5]

As noted above, the production is of a high quality. It's a track I would listen to again, and I don't say that often about other young hip-hop artists. The word play is good and the character of the song is humbling. I would be interested to see more lyric depth in another track.

 

Poet.