This is a piano melody of this song I've compose, your criticisms I will not be taken personally I will only see it as a person wanting to help. Do you think that after listening to this (the way it is) A singer can sing this song?
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LOVE©2016 Irwin Abrigo(1st Verse)Sometimes I realize Like a miracleI’m cured insideThat’s howI’m feelingRight nowSome peopleNever fell in loveYet they look youIn the face and say This worldIs a crazy placeThat’s what they sayThey can feelNor understandWhat is loveThey would knowNor understandWhat I’m talking aboutIt is love(Chrous)I’m Not the guyWho will lay downAnd dieI’m willingTo fightTo surviveAnd If loveDon’t work out rightThe first timeI willGive loveA second Try(2nd Verse)They sayLove breaks your heartSo I’d stayed awayWithout a doubtWanted To find a way outMet someoneAnd I fell in loveTo those peopleI would like to sayThis worldIs a happy placeThat’s what I’ll sayI can feel And understandWhat is loveI knowAnd I understandWhat it’s all aboutIt is love(Chorus)I’m Not the guyWho will lay downAnd dieI’m willingTo fightTo surviveAnd If loveDon’t work out rightThe first timeI willGive loveA second Try(Bridge)So wheneveryou fall in loveLook those people face to face and sayThis worldis a happy placeThat you can sayYou will feel And understandWhat is loveYou will knowAnd understandWhat I’m talking aboutIt is love(Chorus)I’m Not the guyWho will lay downAnd dieI’m willingTo fightTo surviveAnd If loveDon’t work out rightThe first timeI willGive loveA second TryIt is loveIt is loveIt is loveLove, love ,love