noaptebuna

i wanted to share this song i made. 'annabelle.' you took one look at his supple skin and couldn't wait to sink your teeth in and tear away at his flesh to mend all those wounds of your worn vest annabelle, my annabelle no i won't ever blame you cuz if i were you, i would have, too done the same your mother made a fool of you when she let all those men inside of you she got to fill their lust by telling you you'd better thrust it wasn't until she left the house that you made sure to seek all them out but they never knew just what you had lured them to until it was too late chorus they locked you up and sent you away with no averment of foul play but until this day your name rings true carved out in his skin..

I also wanted to share this track I made. 'Annabelle.'

Thanks for that. Yep, removing the bass altogether is something I will do to that track in the future. I used Logic actually.

I'd really like to hear what people think of the music. What they like, dislike, strikes them, etc. Thanks in advance <3

Hey all, I wanted to share Dearth that I just put out into cyberspace along with a video I shot for one of the songs. I hope you enjoy it. The songs are available on iTunes. This is all pretty new to me. I've had ideas in my head that have just been scratching their way out for some time now, so this just the start of all of that. https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/dearth-ep/id969779311 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3w10XiaiU0 That's all for now. Thanks very much.

Oh, hmm, sorry, I thought this was the proper category. Thanks for letting me know! Which is the correct one?

Yes, thank you for the feedback. It seems most aren't willing to take the time to respond, so I appreciate this more thank you know. In the original version of the track, I did take on an angrier tone in the end of the song, which was ultimately cut. I think when I do record an album version, I will mix it up a bit. I know I should alter the singing but I guess was having trouble where to do so. Perhaps in the bridge I can be louder/angrier? Not sure, but will think about it. Also, I did think it sounded fine with only piano because it seemed passionate, personal and raw. But also, I don't really have any other musicians to work with so it's always been just me, the piano and my voice. Going into the studio soon to record another track called "Never Will" so I'll make that one better!! XXJ

Hey guys, I wanted to share with you my recently recorded track entitled "Nobody's Sin." First and foremost, I'm a writer and the music comes secondary. It's always been that way. Nobody's Sin: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gtg8aVgLaUM&feature=player_embedded Also, here's a link to my YT channel. http://www.youtube.c...sers/noaptebuna Let me know what you guys think. Please subscribe/like the video as well. XXJ