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coombs5200

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About coombs5200

  • Birthday 10/23/1992

Music Background

  • Band / Artist Name
    Jordan Coombs
  • Songwriting Collaboration
    Maybe
  • Musical / Songwriting / Music Biz Skills
    Lyricist, production, promotion.

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Zimbabwe
  • Interests
    Poetry, fashion, romance, love, 1920's to 70's USA.

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  1. Thank you for the feedback guys ill work on a few verses over the next couple of weeks
  2. thanks for the warm welcome guys
  3. Usually not a fan of poems like this however i managed to connect to this one. Good Job! x
  4. Cute little poem, a nice read
  5. So he returns once more to that god forsaken plot, Beached upon a shore of broken promises, Changing his future in each 60 minute slot. Whisky stains the breath in the winter chill, Frozen on the trigger, Let him do what he will. 6 lay still. The barrell rests against his consciousness Slowly a crimson pool, drowns his hoplessness
  6. Hi everyone, My names Jordan and iv just joined, i have only started writing recently and often my songs start off as poems. I am going to post a few up now once i find out how and any feedback is greatly appreciated (as the social circle i am currently in would most probably ridicule me for trying to write poetry and songs) Many thanks, Jordan
  7. Welcome to the forums coombs5200 :)

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