Fapbreathe

so you can use it in Haikus...

first thing that comes to mind is the opening of The Pot by Tool. A Capella worls really well there. ive never done it, not out of of fear or anything, but because i havent written anything i think it will work for i remember when i was doing Higher Music at high school, one of the questions in the exam was 'The saxophone is being played______', you had to fill in the blanks after listening to the piece, one of the options was A Cappela, another was Arco... they must think we suck. (the answer was Ad-Lib iirc)

hey there, welcome aboard! GY!BE, EITS, Pelican, A Silver Mt.Zion, Isis, Cult of Luna, all win

thinking is always handy. otherwise we're robots.

i dont think anyone on this site is That Guy. but once some people i kinda know, and almost wish i didnt, formed a System Of A Down cover band called Nuke The Whales. their vocalist was That Guy. But maybe only because no one can do it like Serj Tankian. (they lasted 3 weeks and had 2 gigs, neither of which was enjoyed by anyone)

wasnt meant to be touchy i do give consideration to these things. Jon didnt mention any of these things. Jon mentioned hooks. if these things *are* defined as hooks then forgive me, to me when ppl talk about hooks i think about sections/words meant to keep ppl listening, like a physical hook if you will. if Jon did mention these things, then my browser is displaying the list as "Hooks", and maybe i should get some cream for it. ^^ not said like a twat.

i dont think about hooks. that does not mean there are not parts in my lyrics/music which are either repeated or have notable dominance. there is. not because i want to use that section/line as something to keep the listener listening, but because thats what best lets me get across my point. i dont think 'hmm, ill put that bit in there again, cos thats my hook' i write what comes into my head, if thats 'alive' thirty two times ( as it is in one AoK song i wrote) then so be it. alive is a very strange word. also: im not one for lies. i despise deceit, and believe that if we put up fewer walls and embraced vunerability then maybe less kids would stab other kids... maybe. so, i wouldnt have said i dont think about hooks, if i thought about hooks.

what if its just called music? i tend to see vocals as having equal importance as any other instrument in the piece, and i write music which supports that. and imo theres no such thing as a 'bad' voice. theres voices i wouldnt use yeah, but im sure they have a niche somewhere. maybe im just an optimist, but i doubt it. (see what i did there??)

57 - Biffy Clyro

i dont think about stuff like that when writing music/lyrics i write what i need to write, if ppl want to spend time noting hooks or patterns in it then so be it, im not gonna indulge it though. each to their own and onwards.

Welcome

Ghost of Perdition - Opeth

White Cluster - Opeth

And With Her Came The Birds - Cult Of Luna

i ate some food, it was doubleplusungood, only a matter of time before someone else mentioned Newspeak so... i did.

Rev 22:20 (dry martini mix) - Puscifer

Rosetta Stoned - Tool

well today i was supposed to be writing a Noise Article, that was my plan. But things got a little overwhelming... 10am - Drove to a Bar/Resturaunt to have a meeting about doing a possible performance there, sorted out a few things 10:20am - Began drive home, turned off roundabout and had to pull in to side as my accelerator...wasnt doing. Realised my car was in fact broken. 10:30am - walked back to bar to use their phone because mine had no credit, phoned dad and said 'phone me back...now' walked back to roundabout 11am - gave up on dad phoning me and presumed he wasnt able to for whatever reason, last time that happened he just came to where he knew i was and dealt with any problems 1:15pm - figured dad was busy but had probably left by now *still standing at roundabout* 2pm - sat down 3pm - decided it was a lot cause, went to get all my valuables out of my locked car abandoned on the road and went and bought 5 mars bars and some water 3:30pm - started walking home, munching mars bars to keep me going 6:15pm - finally someone nice enough stopped and asked where i was going, she had seen me at 'a roundabout' on the way to work, and was now coming back and couldn't cope with just driving past knowing i had been walking for hours 6:30pm - got home, i had walked 15 of the 21 miles from the bar 6:45pm - left with dad to get car 7:10pm - car all fixed 7:30pm- turned on computer and wrote this eventually so...sorry, i'll do it tomorrow, if nothing else horrible happens.

i like this too. It rang true with me, as there are so many people in this world who *are* very nearly machines, and a good few who have completed that transition. There would be no need for friends; nor a need for support. some people really want that to be true. they want to feel indepandant and controlling. and their eyes are dead. it takes a lot of layer removing and desperately trying to find something of worth, some little nugget of fascination, to get past that. hmm, essentially all i've done here is agree with the content. Having never even attempted to delve into poetry I dont really know whether or not this is good by any standard, all i can say is i enjoyed reading it more than i ever enjoyed reading the likes of 'I Took The Path less Travelled By...' in Higher English two years ago so i guess thats something. btw... who is it you would be watching with eyes that kill?

'Foot To The Throat' - Lamb of God

'One Spoke Of The Wheel' - Buckethead

lol night. Welcome

all of the above. welcome

yeah, thats how it was taught to me, obviously though, i was terrible at getting the interval right to create a third, because i always just got 2. never mind, i never did practice trombone nearly as much as i should have. as for hearing of George Chisholm...guess i have now, eh? not too young for anything. apart from incest.

Biffy Clyro, he knows exactly how to connect with pretty much every emotion he sings about. Always hits the spot. Fav Lines: Ill Do My Best To Uphold You, All The Way Down I Wish I Could Have Faltered, Wish I Could Have Changed You Have All These Great Answers, To All These Great Questions, But I Feel They're Passing Me By. and others 2) Maynard James Keenan, excels at exploring betrayal, hatred, fear, decay all those 'bad' things, along with enlightenment, religion etc Has a knack with word setting which i have never seen anything like. tracks that come to mind are Lateralus, 4degrees, Undertow, Rosetta Stoned, Jambi, The Grudge, The Patient, AEnima, 46&2, etc etc etc Fav Lines: with my feet upon the ground, i lose myself between the sounds, and open wide to suck it in, i feel it move across my skin, i'm reaching out, i'm reaching in, i'm reaching for the random for, whatever will bewilder me, whatever will bewilder me, - Lateralus If there were no rewards to reap, no loving embrace to see me through, this tedious path i've chosen here, i certainly would have walked away by now, and i still may, - The Patient. imo