Jump to content

Your Ad Could Be Here

RodChandler

Active Members
  • Posts

    400
  • Joined

  • Last visited

  • Days Won

    4

Posts posted by RodChandler

  1. Haha. Yeah, I think that that's what it is. I started managing a trio of squirrels hoping to get a piece of the musical rodent action. Not going so well.

     

    That's because you're managing those punk ass East Coast squirrels. Everyone knows East coast squirrels are whack. Westsiiiiide is where it's at.

  2. Awesome. I'll look forward to hearing it.

     

    It's funny the way lyric writing comes and goes sometimes. I know from my own personal experience this past year has not been productive for me at all for writing new material lyrically, but I have grown a ton in arrangement, mixing, and part playing with a guitar so it was still educational and most of it was learned between here and kompoz.

  3. I think you'll like it here. It's a good place with some great people and resources for writing growth.

    It's my other internet hangout although I haven't posted much around here of late.

  4. The local pawn shop has/had a bunch of Boss pedals last time I was there. As soon as I get another decent tube amp I'm going to maybe go back and see if he still has some of them. I have never used them personally, but have heard plenty of good things about them.

  5. Actually Scotsman is pretty close to right, as is Kel in his observation. It did originate mainly in Appalachia, however there were very few settlers there that weren't from Ireland, Scotland, Wales and to a lesser extent England. Where I'm from also was settled by Germans and Poles, and Czechs, so you find that country music from Texas in the earlier days contained more brass instruments and waltzes as well as the influence from those from the British Isles.

     

    But country music as we know it, the music from Nashville derived mainly from the bluegrass styles of the Virginias, Kentucky, and Tennessee which were primarily Scot and Irish and Welsh. As time as gone by, and other regions of the country where settlers from other parts of the world hailed from moved into the country music business, you got more of an amalgamation of influence.

     

    That was a long way to simply say that I agree with both Scotsman and Kel! :D

  6. I use all of the above. It just depends on where I am and what I am doing and what is at hand. Most times when I'm driving, which is most of the time, I use the voice recorder on iPhone to hum fragments of melody to flesh out later or lyric ideas. If I'm in my guitar room, I have a notebook that I jot down lyrics and I will use the voice recorder to grab riffs or melodies or progressions I like or want to write around, and lastly at times on my laptop. I will take music I have and listen to it and write lyrics in Wordpad or sometimes even just lyrics that intrigue me with no music at all lined out for them. I also will cull from my notebooks and phone recorder and write them all up in Word to keep all the different songs collated into one area.

  7. Thanks for the read and response Psyve. This particular style is Pantoum or Pantun poetry and you nailed it as far as how one goes as far as what lines go where. As for the ending, I suppose one could use any order they chose, but from what I have found you flip the lines from the first stanza on the last one. Thanks to JHanover posting about this style that brought this particular form back from the dregs of long forgotten memory. It is a fun style that lends well to writing from the sub-conscious.

  8. I'm not sure if it was your intention, but it took me to the turn of the 19th into the 20th century New York with it's imagery and feelings it conjured up. Nice work.

  9. Conflicted

    Sometimes I believe I am wrong

    Little makes me feel right

    I lose myself inside of a song

    Pass away the small hours of night

    Little makes me feel right

    Too often I never even try

    Pass away the small hours of night

    Encapsulated in a weary sigh

    Too often I never even try

    I let the world move at will

    Encapsulated in a weary sigh

    Why is honesty such a bitter pill

    I let the world move at will

    Content with its ebb and flow

    Why is honesty such a bitter pill

    I can no longer watch it go

    Content with its ebb and flow

    Urgent is the need for change

    I can no longer watch it go

    Disconnection no longer strange

    Urgent is the need for change

    Life once again my own

    Disconnection no longer strange

    Inner resilliance has grown

    Life once again my own

    I lose myself inside of a song

    Inner resilliance has grown

    Sometimes I believe I am wrong

  10. I like it. The one thing I like about much of your writing, be it lyrics or here as a poem is the film-noir quality to your work. It is very real and gritty and true to life.

  11. Very powerful, and I liked the use of fire at the end as a contrast to the water of the previous verses. I took away that it could be the fire of anger, the fire of ambition, or even the fire of an all consuming passion that maybe the speaker had not yet found with someone else. But since the water element was there it needed the yang to its yin in the element of fire to bring it forth.

  12. The longer I looked the less I could see...

    Very nice, I can completely relate to reaching that Zen-like state where everything on your mind blends into nothingness. Losing yourself totally in the moment to where not even the passing of time is noticed. This one definitely took me to that pond, it was a very nice read.

  13. I have to agree with psyve, I like that it leaves it up to me the reader to take my own interpretation away from your poem. To me that is the essence of a good poem.

    For me the barrel resting against his consciousness was the line that conjured up the most stark vision of his desperation.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By continuing to use our site you indicate acceptance of our Terms Of Service: Terms of Use, our Privacy Policy: Privacy Policy, our Community Guidelines: Guidelines and our use of Cookies We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue.