Hello, All Im New?

[Gonzalez]

i came in search for answers

i would like you guys to rate my piano composition? it has minor errors but try to listen pass it

[john]

Hi and welcome Gonzalez, welcome to Songstuff

The best place to get reviews of compositions is on the song and recording critique board Especially if you are looking for detailed comments .

I played your song. Melody wise it works well, the basic structure is pretty good, but you could do with bringing in some more contrast in your left hand... the ongoing arpeggio robs it of that. Don't get me wrong, what you have works, but the lack of contrast there robs it of some power. Just some initial thoughts.

Cheers

John

[Gonzalez]

Hi and welcome Gonzalez, welcome to Songstuff

The best place to get reviews of compositions is on the song and recording critique board Especially if you are looking for detailed comments .

I played your song. Melody wise it works well, the basic structure is pretty good, but you could do with bringing in some more contrast in your left hand... the ongoing arpeggio robs it of that. Don't get me wrong, what you have works, but the lack of contrast there robs it of some power. Just some initial thoughts.

Cheers

John

thank you for the honest opinions

-yes i have felt that way too, that by the time i get to half the song, i will feel bored with my left hand, but im not sure how to fix it

also what section? i posted it on, showcase something something.. i dont really want to spam the forums

[Gonzalez]

ok i put it in th section you recommneded

[john]

Showcase is really intended for finished songs, but no worries As you're look for critique I'll remove the showcase post if that is ok?

[KennyChaffin]

Welcome!

[Gonzalez]

yea its fine

and thank you everyone.. btw its gonzalez with a z

[grueser2]

Hi Gonzalez...welcome to the forum

[FinnArild]

Welcome, Gonzalez ...

[Gonzalez]

thank you everyone