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Hi and welcome Gonzalez, welcome to Songstuff :)

The best place to get reviews of compositions is on the song and recording critique board :) Especially if you are looking for detailed comments .

I played your song. Melody wise it works well, the basic structure is pretty good, but you could do with bringing in some more contrast in your left hand... the ongoing arpeggio robs it of that. Don't get me wrong, what you have works, but the lack of contrast there robs it of some power. Just some initial thoughts. :)

Cheers

John

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Hi and welcome Gonzalez, welcome to Songstuff :)

The best place to get reviews of compositions is on the song and recording critique board :) Especially if you are looking for detailed comments .

I played your song. Melody wise it works well, the basic structure is pretty good, but you could do with bringing in some more contrast in your left hand... the ongoing arpeggio robs it of that. Don't get me wrong, what you have works, but the lack of contrast there robs it of some power. Just some initial thoughts. :)

Cheers

John

thank you for the honest opinions :)

-yes i have felt that way too, that by the time i get to half the song, i will feel bored with my left hand, but im not sure how to fix it :(

also what section? i posted it on, showcase something something.. i dont really want to spam the forums :(

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:) Showcase is really intended for finished songs, but no worries :) As you're look for critique I'll remove the showcase post if that is ok?
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Welcome, Gonzalez :) ...

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