My Songs

[Bagelboy]

Posting some songs from my first CD. Looking for a bigger audience and feedback.

The first song, the Change, draws on the influences of the Byrds/Beatles

The second song, My Grievous Heartache draws on the influence of Hank Williams, Merle Haggard and Gram Parsons

The third song, Can't Figure This Out is my attempt at blues a la ZZ Top

I've got lots more songs. checkout Jim Camaren at Reverbnation or at Facebook. Would very much appreciate feedback

Posted a new song: "The Change"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/156145958

Posted a new song: "My Grievous Heartache"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/156266025

Posted a new song: "Can't Figure This Out"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/157226184

[Marty Dolciamore]

Jim,

Good stuff, man - is that you singing? Nice voice. You're hitting all the genre's I'm familiar with.

Can't Figure That Out could stand a little B3 - sweet!

Heartache is nice the way you go from old timey radio into that clear vocal, could you cut that down a bit or maybe stick it somewhere else in the song? It's a long way to go for a listener, IMHO. At 22 seconds if you could sweep it into the clear vocal that would be too friggin' cool.

Change is nice - check out the Smithereens, this could be a bit more edgy like them.

I'm fanning you bro - keep rocking!

Marty

Edited January 23, 2013 by Marty Dolciamore

[Bagelboy]

Thank you very much for your comments Marty. Yes that is me singing. I like the Smithereens' comment, hadn't thought of it before, but I agree, they had a great edgy/pop sound. You've inspired me to post some of my other songs (Cookies and No Expectations) which have more of a JJ Cale/Derek & Dominoes feel. Would appreciate your feedback on those as well. Best to you Jim.

I'll have to try to post these songs later, as the files are too big for this platform. thanks again.

Since I couldn't post the aforementioned songs, I posted two others instead They are at the same Revebnation site as in original post. I'm So Blue and Little Bird. No, these ones are not like JJ Cale/Derek. But I'm So Blue does have the B3.

Edited January 24, 2013 by Bagelboy