Crimson Rain

[Hope4Peace]

Crimson Rain

Springtime rain is falling

the sky remains so blue

springtime rain is falling

reminding me of you

springtime rain is falling

my tears they are the rain

springtime rain is falling

because of all my pain

beautiful creeks are flowing

to the salty ocean blue

they flow with salty tears

Ive shed because of you

beautiful creeks flood'th over

with my salty tears and blood

beautiful creeks flood'th over

then the sky shall soak them up

then one day the springtime rain

shall turn a crimson red

crimson rain from all my pain

from the blood and tears Ive shed

ill dance out in the crimson rain

my pain will then slowly seep

as i lay to rest in the crimson rain

no longer shall i weep

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

[kriss]

wow dude thats very wow!!

i love writin suicidal poetry for some reason but recently mine turned good

umm dunno what else to say but it's amazin

peace

kriss

[Hope4Peace]

wtf! i spelt suicide wrong, lol

[kriss]

oohh yeah so u did, i feel just as for not noticing, i think i need to slow down on the rose wine!!

peace

kriss

[merciful evans]

sounds pretty real

[Steve]

nice.