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UglyGirl


No body came to my birthday party
is it because I'm not pretty like you
false eyelashes and blood red matte lipstick
vanilla frosting highlighter and chocolate drop bronzer.
I'm not one of those pretty girls
I'm just an ugly girl.
Ugly ugly ugly girl.

f*ck all your fake tits
f*ck all your no class fasion sense
I may be an ugly girl
but I know how to give you a good time.
I may be an ugly girl.
But I still get the best sex out of my life.

Super skinny mochachino caramel latte.
Sounds so sweet but tastes so f*cking bitter.
You might have all the riches and plastic ass cheeks
But I have all natural double DD fun bags.
The older I get the more they drop
But I'm an ugly girl
Don't forget to keep reminding me that..

f*ck all your fast cars.
f*ck all your tight ass mini skirts.
I may be an ugly girl
but I can show you a good time.
I may be an ugly girl.
But I still get my ass smacked..


 

Super super skinny mochachina caramel latte
Sounds so sweet but you taste so f*cking bitter.
vanilla fosting highlighter and chocolate drop bronzer
I'll take a bite if it wasn't so artifical 
So I can't be your friend
because I don't have the coins to get my fat sucked out 
and my ass blown up.


f*ck you and your ass cheeks
f*ck you and your credit card
I may be an ugly girl.
but guys still beg for more.
I may be an ugly girl
but I'm sexier than you..

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Right from the start I can tell you are into songwriting, the topic is unconventional and some parts are written quite well.. I wrote down my thoughts to your lyrics below:

 

 

 

 

On 11.9.2016 at 0:38 PM, CazamusMcAz said:

UglyGirl


No body came to my birthday party
is it because I'm not pretty like you
false eyelashes and blood red matte lipstick
vanilla frosting highlighter and chocolate drop bronzer.

- I suppose this vers is for singing rather than rapping, 3-4 create a cool vibe


I'm not one of those pretty girls
I'm just an ugly girl.
Ugly ugly ugly girl.

- a bit lazy with the repetition but ok

 

f*ck all your fake tits
f*ck all your no class fasion sense

- attitude on fleek, line is solid


I may be an ugly girl
but I know how to give you a good time.
I may be an ugly girl.
But I still get the best sex out of my life.

- this is where it turns into a catch 22 scenario, writing a song about this kind of emotion is kinda pointless since the sassy attitude defies the reason for writing this song, namely accepting the circumstance your are complaining about :D  soo if you are happy with your ugly girl role, you would hardly write a song justifying your ugliness 

 

On 11.9.2016 at 0:38 PM, CazamusMcAz said:

Super skinny mochachino caramel latte.
Sounds so sweet but tastes so f*cking bitter.

. best line in the whole song, aesthetic words and cool meaning


You might have all the riches and plastic ass cheeks
But I have all natural double DD fun bags.

- you might have all the riches - is a cool saying to use, but ass checks and natural double d fun bags are just cringeworthy words and should never be used in song lyrics ever ever ever..  (particularly with a useless extra D, since you already wrote double d :D)

 


The older I get the more they drop
But I'm an ugly girl
Don't forget to keep reminding me that..

- this is good as well, deep meaning but no awkward words or silly constructions

 

f*ck all your fast cars.
f*ck all your tight ass mini skirts.
I may be an ugly girl
but I can show you a good time.

- could be a cool bridge, meaning and catch 22 are the same obviously


I may be an ugly girl.
But I still get my ass smacked..

- yeah do not write lines like that pls..


 

Super super skinny mochachina caramel latte
Sounds so sweet but you taste so f*cking bitter.
vanilla fosting highlighter and chocolate drop bronzer
I'll take a bite if it wasn't so artifical 

- there you go, YOU CAN WRITE COOL LYRICS. :excl:

those 4 lines are really good!

 


So I can't be your friend
because I don't have the coins to get my fat sucked out 
and my ass blown up.

- and then you ruin it again :( 

 

 

 

All in all I think that you have quite a bite of talent, but some of the words you use are wayyyy too unstylish.

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