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Username: Neave Nation 

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https://soundcloud.com/neavenation/really-feel-me-prod-neave (my rapping and beat)

https://soundcloud.com/neavenation/flossy (my rapping and beat)

https://soundcloud.com/neavenation/main-hoe (my beat )

https://soundcloud.com/neavenation/blue-wave-prod-neave (my beat)

What area you would like to be critiqued on the most: The quality of my beats, my lyrics, flow of the rapping, overall rapping, overall beat, anything I can work on. Please be as honest as possible, just trying to improve thank you. 

 

Other relevant information: Just started making my beats and rapping, please let me know what you think thanks

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I really like the beats and the flow, but the lyrics don't work for me. Maybe it's just not my thing, but to me the lyrics sound bland and uninspired. There's just nothing to them, especially the first one where you just don't have any punchlines. Now I'm not suggesting you go all out with them like Lil Wayne does, that's overdoing it. But it really needs more unique material to be good.

 

I like the beats though. Thumbs up there.

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