Daffodils on Windowsills

[HenryOFarrell]

Hey guys, I'm Henry O'Farrell and this is my new song - Daffodils on Windowsills. Acoustic rappy song about falling in love in the summer: (Check out below for lyrics and what its about!). 

 

So the songs about a boy and girl who fall head over heals for each other in the spring, but for some reason (I'll leave that one up to you!), they can't see each other over the winter. So the boy keeps a daffodil on his windowsill in winter to remind him of spring and her. 

 

The lyrics are:

 

Growing Daffodils on windowsill all winter long

And all nightlong well glow like street signs made of neon 

From mountain peak to desert creek all in a lovesong

 

Your packing up you brief case, Love is just a brief taste, falling at your feet like you tie together my shoelace

You put me through you pace, unfamiliar faces, living on the traces of your love 

 

We spin spinning tops on table tops chasing rain drops down bus stop doors 

Running through wheat crops until summer stops Until we pack up shop and put the pictures back in the draw 

 

Growing Daffodils on windowsill all winter long

And all nightlong well glow like street signs made of neon 

From mountain peak to desert creek all in a lovesong 

 

You got me going to, 

church on a Monday raincoats on a sunny day, half a pack of cigarette sitting in my ashtray

I need a clear sentence like HD display, your my colder than ice but sweeter than sorbet, I need a clear answer like fill out a fucking survey 

 

Growing Daffodils on windowsill all winter long

And all nightlong well glow like street signs made of neon 

From mountain peak to desert creek all in a lovesong 

 

(Take of top capo now) 

 

Growing Daffodils on windowsill all winter long

And all nightlong well glow like street signs made of neon 

From mountain peak to desert creek all in a lovesong 

 

Your the daffodil on my windowsill until summer comes back around

 

Hope you enjoy :))

[Pahchisme Plaid]

You've got a great voice and an interesting title for your song that pulled me in.  Just a couple things though...

Daffodils are spring time perennials, but as with most perennials, they have a limited life.  Even if the bulbs are forced, after they flower, they would last maybe 3-4 weeks.  I don't think they'd make it through the winter.

 

The other thing, you may want to check out the posting criteria.  I could be wrong, but there is a restricted access forum for expletive lyrics.  I think the admin tries to keep it pretty clean here for the under 18 crowd.  In order to post in the forums appropriate, you'll need to do some commenting on other songs or lyrics.  Its the beginner's requirement.  After you've reached a number of posts, then you'll be able to post in the song, lyric or restricted forum.  You might get more feedback there besides.