I know.

[Cool Guy]

I saw you standing in the dark

down those empty lanes

I know that things have gotta change 

between the two of us

I know we both've felt the pain

I know that we've made mistakes

and never learnt 

Yeah, it's kept me up at nights

thinking of you and I

oh it hurts me every single time.

 

I saw you crying in the street 

why'd you run away from me

you could tell me how you feel

and i'd never judge

I know i didn't deserve it back then

lacked the courage, the strength 

didn't stand up for my friend

things got bad but that wasn't

how i wanted things to end.

 

I wish i could forget it

wish i didn't regret it

cause every time i think of it 

makes me wanna cry

can't stop those tears

can't leave the past behind 

I know I felt bad so i wanted to apologize

no I didn't want you by my side 

no i didn't want you to sympathize

now you didn't know how i felt inside

I know thing never worked out 

but I'm glad i tried :)

 

*First Tryy*

 

[Glammerocity]

First try at writing? Good effort. Some nice phrases and I like that both verses start with "I saw you" - the senses are always good things to refer to - but nothing too wordy it'd be tricky to write around.

Edited May 12, 2018 by Glammerocity

[Cool Guy]

Thanks for your feedback buddy, I'm new to this and here to learn so it means a lot