Lyrics about the recent school shootings. need some honest feedback.

[L Nimbus]

After all the school shootings lately, I've decided to make a song regarding the topic.
Note, this is just the lyrics, written by an amateur and work in progress.
Any tips you can give me for improving it would would mean a lot.
Note : This is meant to be a medium speed rap song.

Disclaimer: this song was written by me alone and as far as I know, does not borrow lyrics from any other songs.
 

It's early morning, I open the paper.

There's been another shooting, I reach for my stapler.

I got a list, thick as my wrist.

When's it gonna be enough ? when's the prez gonna get tough ?

And every time, I hear them cry " I wuz bullied"

well f*ck you, so was I.

 

But don't you DARE walk in school while you're packin.
Imma tell your right now that's the fackin.
Coward's way out,
murder some kids,
get your name out.
Be another monster for them to point a finger at.
You wanna make your family go through all that ?


But I'm not completly putting the blame on you.
What about all the teachers who know what happenin and nothin they do ?
They just ignore it, they let the bullies strut on through.
And then they Shakin their heads for the camera when it all blew.
When there bodies layin on the floor.
they pissing themselves behind the door.
They crying an prayin an feelin they scared.
And knowin they coulda stopped this if they just cared.

Don't keep it bottled inside til it pops.
tell your parents, tell the cops.
If the teachers do nothin, get a can of Mace.
Next time they corner you, unload it in their face.
Get all your friends an beat the shit outta them.
Then they see what it's like when it's done. to em.

Edited June 6, 2018 by L Nimbus