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Here is my latest project.

 

 

Intro
Verse 1
Shadows and candle light,
midnight and soft moon light
whispers upon me soft in my ear.
Verse 2
Wrapped in a warm embrace,
our two hears begin to race,
and nothing else matters it's just you and me.
Chorus 1
Noting else matters cause I just can't see,
what you ever found worthy in me.
No nothing else matters cause i cant believe,
Oh that somehow I'm just what you need.
Verse 3
Now the tensions begin to rise,
and the passion that's in your eyes,
reflect back the hunger I can no longer hide.
Verse 4
And you give what you need me to,
take what I need from you,
and nothing else matters except here and now.
Chorus 2
Nothing else matters cause this fire that's ablaze,
pulls us in like a moth to a flame.
No noting else maters cause each breath that we take,
feeds the fire of the love that we make.

Break
Verse 5
Now the evening begins to close,
and beside me you start to doze,
and the world slips away as you drift off to dream.
Verse 6
And as you lie here with me,
well even a fool could see,
that nothing else matters as long your near.
Chorus 3
Nothing else matters cause here in your arms,
as I lie here awash in your charms.
No nothing else matters cause I've known all along,
how I'm finally right where I belong.
Outro
Nothing else matter as long as your here with me now,
when I close my eyes and I dream of you.
And I dream of you...all the time.
 

Edited by ccarnucci
Added Lyrics
Posted

Hey Christian,

 

It's a really pleasant listen. Can you post the lyrics? I understood most of them but not all, so it would be great to be able to read them while listening.

 

I know this is not critique section, but anyways I want to say that, you have a very nice voice, and great pitch, but I noticed in some parts vocals can be thighten up a bit more, I think. I'm guessing it might be a little breathing issue, maybe, but I could hear that in certain parts long vowels lose a little of consistency. But the performance was great! And sounds very nice! Thanks for sharing!

 

Are you planning to work on this tune a little more? Or do you consider it done?

 

 

 

Posted

Thanks for listening.  No doubt about the vocal quality.  I do not fancy myself a singer, I just do because it's hard to find others to do the vocal tracks.  And for some reason this song is tougher to sing than most of my other stuff.   I did so so many takes, and pieced together the best I could produce.  I'm glad you liked it though.  

 

And thanks again for taking the time to listen.

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Oh, but don't doubt your voice is nice and very pleasant to listen, I liked it a lot! I don't think you need to find other singers, it just takes longer maybe to get good takes! :)

 

I really think in this case it's a matter of breathing. I've just started to sing "seriously" about 2 months ago. I'm taking lessons and, I found out that when the sound of the voice gets unbalanced, in most of the cases (if not all), it's because of breathing and breathing support!

 

You've done a great job! I wish I was able to produce myself a whole song, sounding this great! ^^

 

 

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