Insomnia

[GocartMoz]

Thanks for the opportunity:

 

The Glory Ride

Music & Lyrics by David S. Becker

© 2014 David S. Becker Music

 

Listen to The Glory Ride by GocartMoz on #SoundCloud

 

 

INTRO

VERSE 1

I'm

I'm half way there

I've had the ride of my life beside you 

But there's more to share

So lets go

And pay the fare

We'll own the road as the wind

Blows back our hair

 

CHORUS

28 great years flew by

I won't give them back

Another 28 with you

Is all I lack

 

INTERLUDE

VERSE 2

Do you recall

The night we met

You made me change my shirt as I stammered

Drenched in sweat

Well I'm still

Just a bit tongue tied

With every look that you send my way

On the Glory Ride

 

CHORUS

INTERLUDE 2

BRIDGE

So baby hop on in

Our Glory Ride begins again

 

VERSE 3

Well I

I have an E-Street roll

It's smooth jazz for you by the pool

And a moonlight stroll

For you

A glass of wine and a book

I'll take a diet coke and give Die Hard

Another look

 

CHORUS

OUTRO

[TheGarageJump]

Hi GocartMoz, 

Thanks for posting this. The upbeat jingle jangle guitar drew me in. I really liked the way the keys came in at the chorus and thought that the bridge content worked very well. The musicianship is very good here.

Chris (TheGarageJump)

[TheGarageJump]

Hi GocartMoz,

How's it going? Hope you are doing ok.

I faught the fear and uploaded my first song to YouTube the other night, 'Fed a False Concept' to 'TheGarageJump' channel, one a week to follow over the next 3 months. I am looking to get some momentum going in the channel and invest in it. Could you give the song a listen and post a comment please? It would be great if you would. Thanks. Here is the link  https://youtu.be/HFF2L42U . If that doesn't work, if you key in 'thegaragejump' and the song title, that should take you there.

Chris

[MikeRobinson]

Nicely done.

 

At 28 years my wife and I are just a few years ahead of you.  (Wow ... and they say that women are smart.  Yet they haven't caught on to us yet ... or maybe they did?)  😲

 

The instruments are very clean, and the vocals sit well in the mix.

Edited May 12, 2022 by MikeRobinson

[Mora Amaro La Loba]

Hola @GocartMoz

I like love songs and this is no exception. Good job here
arrangement works great!
Good mix too!! and good voices and guitars

 

Mora