deep within the soul music video :)

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[john]

Great way to get around lip sync!

 

Work on more frequent shot changes. Videos have their own visual rhythm. It’s no more footage than you have, but changing what is on screen much more often, synced to the beat and increasing speed of shot change or events like effects with musical intensity.

 

I like the song. The intro is a bit shaky, hesitant, but it settles into a nice groove with some great flow. My only complaint is about making out what you say. 95% there, but there are times you could work a little on being clearer.

 

Overall, well done. Great to see. @Peggy, one for our channel?

[Cody]

3 hours ago, john said:

Great way to get around lip sync!

 

I remember seeing some videos around 09 while H1N1 was starting to get bad, and thinking the same thing hahahah.  

 

 

At least you've got it over your nose, but stop touching things then touching your mask so much! you're making me nervous hahahahah!  Kidding aside, I like the video and the tune! 

 

I think it could be helped with even more shot changes, or even just some more added effects like the speed up or weird spinny transitions like that are already there like @john stated, but great stuff!

 

While I believe less is more in a lot of music/lyric writing, in a video my eyes always want more and its hard to overdo it, at least for my tastes.   

[Derekf]

Truth!