my new release - Haim Shim - Another Love (singer-songwriter)

[haim shim]

Hi dear members.

Yesterday I've released a new song. It's called "Another Love".

I wrote it about a past relationship I've been in a few years ago.

I think it's one of my best produced songs so far.

Enjoy listening and feel free to let me know what you think, Haim Shim.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PkqGAcnLHBw

 

 

[Peggy]

Very nice..

 

[haim shim]

17 hours ago, Peggy said:

Very nice..

 

 

@peggy - Thanks! Appreciate you taking the time to listen. Cheers.

[Samson Reece]

really nicely produced like you said, great vocals. Production on your vocals is very clean. The change up when the drums kick in is definitely needed to keep the song interesting. My only critique would be that the lyrics are very predictable but it's still a nice song.

[haim shim]

12 hours ago, Samson Reece said:

really nicely produced like you said, great vocals. Production on your vocals is very clean. The change up when the drums kick in is definitely needed to keep the song interesting. My only critique would be that the lyrics are very predictable but it's still a nice song.

 

Thanks Samson. Yeah, that change up is great.

[john]

You’ve a great voice Haim.

 

Out of interest, did you post this for critique at any stage, on any forums?

[haim shim]

On 7/4/2021 at 2:09 AM, john said:

You’ve a great voice Haim.

 

Out of interest, did you post this for critique at any stage, on any forums?

 

Hi John. Thanks, glad you enjoy my voice.

I haven't posted it for a critique, I wish I had the time to post, then to wait then to improve.. I try to release more often, when I improve it's usually at the next project. If you want to give me feedback feel free I am always opened to learn something new. Sincerely Yours, Haim.