Visions of Love

[Bill Kamen]

 

[MikeRobinson]

"Fantastic production values ... but, too many competing story-lines ... lacking a single cohesive story line for this song ..."

 

Therefore:  "more than one hit song at once," all of them now fighting to get out at the same time.

 

Take the great ideas from the first sixty seconds and develop them into a finish.  Then, "rinse and repeat."  The number of "ideas" that participate in any great song is actually a fairly small number.  Parse them out one at a time, then develop each of them musically as you have now done here.

Edited September 28, 2021 by MikeRobinson

[Bill Kamen]

Thanks Mike

[GregB]

Great voice! Is this a home production with you doing all the parts?

 

I get what Mike said about 'too much going on' but I thinks it settles nicely in the middle.  The sparser arrangement in the ending would have worked really for an intro and first section. 

 

Personal opinion only from an amateur.

 

Cheers,

Greg