Vampires and Vultures

[TheGarageJump]

Hi all, 

I hope that you enjoy 'Vampires and Vultures'. I tried hard to find my inner Hugh Cornwell for this one. Please give this a listen when you get the chance. All comments welcome. Thanks for all the views in the past couple of weeks. Here's the link  https://youtu.be/BL8jHZKmLJA

Cheers,

Chris

[TheGarageJump]

Thanks for watching. What do you reckon to 'Vampires and Vultures'? Can you relate to the lyrics? Did they chime with the music? Did the video make things better or worse? I'm hearing some positives in private feedback....honest... which is great. Developmentally though, I am hearing (and totally agree with) that the sound quality needs work. No excuses. Do you have something which I can work with developmentally in order to make progress in my songwriting please? All help appreciated. I am enjoying this journey. 

[TheGarageJump]

....more than happy to interact here or via private message. Whatever suits...cheers...

[Mora Amaro La Loba]

Hola @TheGarageJump

can't get used to your pan on the left... otherwise the song is very catchy and describes a harsh reality very well

 

Stay well

 

Mora

[Peggy]

21 minutes ago, VoiceEx said:

if you consider this as being a work in progress, it maybe be better to place it in the critique board. The critique board also has more community activity, as an added benefit.

Absolutely.  Chris if you'd like to have this topic moved to the Critique board just let me know.  We try an keep Showcase topics separate from those that the members would like critiqued.    

[TheGarageJump]

Thanks for these three comments. Mora - re the left pan. Amateur hour (great song btw - Sparks)- listening back on my practice headphones, so used to them. Hopefully will be sorted from here on in. Great feedback-thanks. Voice Ex - I appreciate the teckie help - food for thought. If I am putting it out on YouTube I'm putting it out there. All totally subjective I realise. Thanks Peggy - I totally see the distinction now. The comments on showcase are how others will consider how your song has landed to a wider audience. All understood, cheers.