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Absolutely stunning.  This should be #1 on the charts and earning you a very nice paycheck. 

 

I strongly encourage you to make sure that you've registered the USA Copyright and then to peddle this song in Nashville: I'm entirely sure that you will very quickly find a willing buyer.

 

There are only two specific suggestions:

 

(1) ... if you haven't lost any everything."  Much more powerful.

 

(2) Sitting in the background, never calling attention to itself, playing "whole notes," a legato cello/double-bass line.  As the song progresses as it now does, this "line" is always there, subtly "tying the whole thing together."  Never noticeable unless it isn't there.

 

However, once you have sold the song, the subsequent producers will take care of these issues for you.

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On 7/6/2022 at 4:49 AM, john said:

Congratulations on the new release Haim!

 

Hello John, Thanks!

 

On 7/6/2022 at 6:07 AM, MikeRobinson said:

Absolutely stunning.  This should be #1 on the charts and earning you a very nice paycheck. 

 

I strongly encourage you to make sure that you've registered the USA Copyright and then to peddle this song in Nashville: I'm entirely sure that you will very quickly find a willing buyer.

 

There are only two specific suggestions:

 

(1) ... if you haven't lost any everything."  Much more powerful.

 

(2) Sitting in the background, never calling attention to itself, playing "whole notes," a legato cello/double-bass line.  As the song progresses as it now does, this "line" is always there, subtly "tying the whole thing together."  Never noticeable unless it isn't there.

 

However, once you have sold the song, the subsequent producers will take care of these issues for you.

 

Thank you. If you have any potential business suggestions, feel free to contact me on DM.

 

On 7/6/2022 at 2:19 PM, Mora Amaro La Loba said:

Hola @haim shim

I wish yo the best for your new music!!! Very cool listening!!!

Gray well

 

Mora

 

Thank you dear Mora.

 

On 7/6/2022 at 11:24 PM, Reginald Bigsby said:

Nicely crafted song and an appealing track with commercial potential. I agree with @MikeRobinson about changing the word "anything" to "everything" - would enhance the impact of the lyric.

 

Hi Reginals, Thanks.

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WHile Country is not my thing I can appreciated this is well put together and performed 👍 and it's always good to see people DO-ing something rather than talking :)

 

Home produced or commercial studio?

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