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About TheShamrockCrew

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  • Birthday 08/08/1982

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    Music, Movies, Photography.

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    Lyricist (Pop)


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  1. Pop Songwriter Looking For Pop Producer To Collab With

    I only have the link posted to my demos. When I was writing I wasn't trying to get followers. I'm not trying to be famous as an artist. I just want to work on music and make a good living off it.
  2. Under The Moonlight

    Hi everyone, Never got this song critiqued. I wrote it, came up with the melodies and harmonies and laid down the vocals for the demo (I'm not a singer or rapper). Lyrics below. Let me know what you think in general. I'm just starting to look for pop producers to work with so I'm trying to figure out what songs could attract them to want to collab with me. Thanks in advance! Under The Moonlight LYRICS Verse 1 Hey babe I’ve been looking at you Doing your thing the whole night Had to say something before You walked out my life I don’t got no lines I’m just hoping that I’m your type Cause you’re my type Yeh, eh Eh, eh Pre-chorus One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight Chorus 1 Under the moonlight (5x) Verse 2 Come with me I can see a smile Coming in It’s starting to show All you gotta do’s take my hand And we can go, oh Get lost in the moment While we’re dancing real slow Real slow Oh, oh Oh, oh Pre-chorus Chorus 1 Bridge Ready Hold on me real steady Don’t worry bout a thing Cause I’mma treat you like a lady Like a diamond Girls like you It’s hard to find them You got something special And that’s why you outshine them It feels Like this right here was meant to be This magic between you and me It’s like we’re starting our story Starting our history Chorus 2 Under the moonlight (9x)
  3. Hi everyone, I'm a pop songwriter. Live in the NYC area now. Have been writing songs on and off for years. Last worked with a few producers in Los Angeles when I used to live there. My goal right now is to find a producer that wants to collab with me. They send me the beats, I create demos with the ones I like (lyrics, melodies, vocals). Ideally I would like to work with someone who is connected in the industry so that we can pitch the songs we make. I'm not looking to work with producers that want to be artists, and therefore will try to keep the songs to themselves, or any shady characters. Contracts will be drawn up for every song we work on. My demos can be heard below. Looking forward to hopefully getting some responses. DEMOS
  4. Hello Singers, Songwriter here, live in North Jersey close to New York City, and I am currently working with a Producer in the U.K. I create the songs and he takes them to the next level, that's how we work. We are now in search of someone to replace my voice on two of our demos so that we can professionally pitch them to record labels. Once the songs are purchased, you will get $500 dollars (per song you are used on) for helping us out. If the songs are not picked up though, none of us get paid. Anyway, this is NOT a joke or a fraud, a contract will be used, we are 100% serious. If interested, you must have the ability to record the vocals with a professional microphone on your own, be reliable, and a hard worker. To be considered, post a link to your work. We are looking forward to hearing from you! Below are the two demos we are currently looking for someone else to sing on. Song One - Better Than You - Male or Female vocal desired: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6R4iJllzOo Song Two - Hard - Female vocal desired: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSIoThlucis
  5. Hi everyone, So I have been working with a producer in the UK for almost 4 months now and he still hasn't finished any of our projects yet. I have also been talking to another producer in my area but I'm kind of tired of chasing him down. This is why I'm here now. I am looking to work with people who actually want to get things done and are willing to put in the work and time. So take a listen to my music below and if you are interested let me know. My goal is to work with someone who has connections with singers, labels, things like that, and who can take my music to the level where it needs to go so we can both profit. Thanks Smile http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzFzyhWJ2C4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsyTfBzqA7I http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSIoThlucis http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S79NnFD6fVI
  6. New Pop/electro Song - Name & Number

    LOL thanks!
  7. New Pop/electro Song - Booty Call

    Hey there. Thanks for listening. That's so embarrassing that I didn't notice I used serious twice! I just changed it in the video above. As for the other changes, I will probably have to tinker with all my songs in the end so thank you for the suggestions! I will be sure to try them out. As for you Cho, Thank you for the nice comments as well :-) Made my day!
  8. Wait For The Dawn - Mastered!

    I'm listening on my laptop with headphones on. The quality is clearly great, but I wish your vocals were louder because right now they sound like they are hiding a bit behind the music. As for the song itself, I like the music, I like the melody, the lyrics, it's a cool song. Good job!
  9. New Pop/electro Song - Booty Call

    Here is another one. It's a racy song but there's nothing that explicit going on other than me saying "booty call". As usual I produced, wrote, and performed it. My goal is to become a songwriter. Feedback is welcome. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YkBztMUduSs
  10. Hangman

    Ok first impression was "this is taking too long to start" but then it kicked in and I honestly thought WOW. This is very well done and very inspirational because it is so damn cool. It's moody, fresh, dangerous, and I really enjoyed it. I wish you would turn it into a song with vocals and rearrange it. It's great though!
  11. Working On It

    It sounds good to me, like previously stated totally boy band-ish vibe which is a good thing, to me anyway. I'm just not sure about that piano though. I feel like it's too sharp or something. Maybe use another one? Something more toned down?
  12. New Pop/electro Song - Name & Number

    Thank you very much for the feedback!
  13. New Pop/electro Song - Name & Number

    That's REALLY nice of you. I'm not a professional. I have just been doing this in my bedroom for a few years now as a hobby but I want to see if I can actually make it so that's really nice of you to say, it's encouraging. Thank you :-)
  14. Still Wakin'up!

    It's cool. It's not something I would usually listen to but it's well done. Sounds like a Bon Jovi song lol.
  15. New Pop/electro Song - Name & Number

    Hi everyone, So here is one of my new songs titled "Name & Number". As the topic description states, I wrote, produced, and performed it myself. My goal is to become a professional songwriter. Any feedback regarding this song is welcome! Name & Number http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsyTfBzqA7I