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Posts posted by meli3586
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It's a good start for a newbie but I don't see al that much rhyming to be honest although It does flow and have some rhythym. You should use rhymezone.com or something like that to rhyme better. Trust me it helps me a lot and most lyricists use dictionaries or a thesaurus or etc to help them along.
keep trying and you will get better!
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Is this better? http://youtube.com/watch?v=QgD3b1-OQXc
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Do I sing it well? http://youtube.com/watch?v=Qf0xghS5mgc
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1st video Mobile version http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fKE_cmSqyVM desktop version http://youtube.com/watch?v=fKE_cmSqyVM and 2nd video desktop version http://youtube.com/watch?v=WPvmT_EoOUc mobile version http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WPvmT_EoOUc any help would be appreciated and I wrote the song
the 1st video is 38 seconds and the 2nd is 50 seconds.
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