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THE GAMBLER (poem) L BLUNT NOV 2006
Hes looking at the stars ,
when hes living in the gutter ,
goes to the bookies to have a little flutter ,
hoping the horse comes in without a stutter ,
spend his winnings on a dirty scutter ,
down to the pub to celebrate with a beer ,
moneys all gone and hes got no idea ,
better and gamblers all want it 100 to 1 ,
they get really upset when the moneys all gone ,
on his way home and back to his den ,
never never wants to bet again ,
when all thats left is a free bookies pen ,
oh yes hes the gambling man ,
never listens hes just so addicted ,,
no money left ,
and hes been evicted ,
the gambler , the gambler ,
By L Blunt 2006
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Well hello everyone first of all , and i am glad i found this site to say the least .
My name is Lee James Blunt (No relation to james blunt) I am 28 years old from shirebrook near mansfield UK , i love many different genres of music , but mainly rock / Indie but have a love for Johnny cash and Punk music .
I am an ex soldier and have travelled to many countries throughout the world since leaving and have had many life experiences since leaving , i go to many gigs and festivals . I play guitar and sing when i get chance in a band . I have written a lot of material and i am going to post my stuff here to see what kind of feedback i get , criticism always helps as they say , i also enjoy writing my songs as storys of modern day culture and i write a lot of poetry .
Heres a couple of my first
THE SOLDIERS STORY Lee Blunt 2006
HE WORE THE GREEN CAMOUFLAGE ,
HE WAS A SOLDIER AT LARGE ,
HE LEFT HIS HOMETOWN ROOTS ,
TO WEAR THOSE COMBAT BOOTS ,
GERMANY , POLAND AND EVEN IRAQ ,
HE,S BEEN TO ALL THE PLACES WITH A PACK ON HIS BACK ,
22 YEARS UNDER HER MAJESTYS REIGN ,
SEEN HIS SHARE OF PLEASURE AND PAIN ,
AND NOW HE IS BACK IN HIS HOME REGION ,
AND AN HONOURABLE MEMBER OF THE ROYAL BRITISH LEGION ,
OLD AND BOLD WITH A GREAT SENSE OF PRIDE ,
SAT AT THE TABLE WITH A PINT BY HIS SIDE ,
TELL HIS WAR STORIES WHERE HE WAS PUT TO THE TEST ,
HEAD HELD HIGH AND MEDALS PINNED TO HIS CHEST ,
HES THE OLD SOLDIER ,
NOBODY TOLD YA ,
ALWAYS RESPECT HIM ,
NEVER FORGET HIM .
LEE BLUNT NOV 06
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THE SOLDIERS STORY Lee Blunt 2006
HE WORE THE GREEN CAMOUFLAGE ,
HE WAS A SOLDIER AT LARGE ,
HE LEFT HIS HOMETOWN ROOTS ,
TO WEAR THOSE COMBAT BOOTS ,
GERMANY , POLAND AND EVEN IRAQ ,
HE,S BEEN TO ALL THE PLACES WITH A PACK ON HIS BACK ,
22 YEARS UNDER HER MAJESTYS REIGN ,
SEEN HIS SHARE OF PLEASURE AND PAIN ,
AND NOW HE IS BACK IN HIS HOME REGION ,
AND AN HONOURABLE MEMBER OF THE ROYAL BRITISH LEGION ,
OLD AND BOLD WITH A GREAT SENSE OF PRIDE ,
SAT AT THE TABLE WITH A PINT BY HIS SIDE ,
TELL HIS WAR STORIES WHERE HE WAS PUT TO THE TEST ,
HEAD HELD HIGH AND MEDALS PINNED TO HIS CHEST ,
HES THE OLD SOLDIER ,
NOBODY TOLD YA ,
ALWAYS RESPECT HIM ,
NEVER FORGET HIM .
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Paradise
in Poets' Corner
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I really like the wording and it has a great flow but i would have made it a little shorter but thats my personal opinion
blunty