Drew

We had to write a sonnet for English class. I'm a musician, not a lyricist/poet so I will be satisfied with what I've got. What are your overall suggestions? I'm not really sure the different lines tie together very well and some stuff feels to me that it's their just to fit the rhyme scheme. Thanks Skylark The skylarks that sit in the laurel trees Wake me with their slow, bittersweet tune. The solit’ry wolf hears in the evening breeze Another lonesome wolf howling at the moon. The hummingbird starts to become weary From making love to the promiscuous rose. The day awakens overcast and dreary. The fox has run away with all of the does. The robin builds his nest with the bible page He stole from the alcoholic pastor. Nomad mouse thinks of the nest with env’ous rage, And sees those holy words as alabaster. The wind blows through the leaves and makes such a sound That reveals the beauty shiv’ring on the ground.

Hey I don't really know what to say. My name is Drew, I'm a freshman, I love soccer and footbag, indie and jazz music, and I play the piano, saxophone, and guitar. I like to write even though I'm probably the worst singer you know haha anybody with any questions can reply to this or pm me or w/e Thanks, Drew