[In The Inside]

*This is a really short poem because I couldn't think of anything else to write... so yeah!*

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I'm always pretending that everything is fine,

All you hear is my laughter,

All you see is my smile.

But there is more than just that- in the inside.

 

If other were to see myself from within,

They would see me as a different person.

They'll surely find an angry soul always shouting and cursing.

A broken heart always crying and moaning,

Desperately yearning to feel love's warm touch.

 

Lost hopes and dreams that were once filled with life

Have slowly diminished and died.

Such things, of course, I tell no one

Only me, myself, and I

All in the inside.

[Dear Love]

Dear Love,

 

Help me, I'm hurting.

For I'm suffering from the loss of your love;

the harsh scars still left from your burning.

I still carry the weight of the pain on my shoulders,

I'm climbing mountains of regret that I can not get over.

My eyes are red from crying,

Time is quickly flying, and

my mind keeps rewinding back to the horrible yells of our fighting's.

 

Dear Love,

 

Without you nothing is the same,

It seems like every bad thing is in my name

and all the memories of love we shared has burned into flames.

 

Dear Love,

 

Please come back! Hear my pleas!

Love me once more just as you did before!

Don't fade me into your memories!

 

Dear Love,

I miss you.

Do you miss me?

 

 

[Get A Life]

This poem is really good!

 

I like the overall theme/tone of the poem. To me, it feels like it's told from a teenager's point of view.

 

It was funny as well!

 

Keep it up.

[Umm...hi?]

My name is DeAmber. The reason why I'm on this site is because I need feedback/advice for my lyrics.