Alon Sharon

Hey everybody,My name is Alon SharonI am a music producer/songwriter based in Tel Aviv, Israel. I wrote a ballad on my guitar and would like to get some feedback on it.https://soundcloud.com/alonsharon/alon-sharon-miss-youLyrics:Verse 1:There's nothing else to say when it's all goneJust the emptiness you feel when it's too lateYour'e the only one I ever loved more than myselfJust Remember this as time will go awayPre Chorus + Chorus:And you, I just want to lay my body next to youYour'e gone and now I feel it tooI miss you, I miss youVerse 2:If you ever walked away from me, I couldn't be freeIt's just who we areThere's so much I want to say, But I can't right nowIt's just How I amPre Chorus + Chorus:And you, I just want to lay my body next to youYour'e gone and now I feel it tooI miss you, I miss youThanks in Advance!