Re: another piece of...

[Steve]

I thought I was in love

now I pray for the stars above

the great exclamation!

how to get out of the situation?

I'm lost, I'm found and bound

to finally become the clown....

H.

Ps. Doesn't Xactly RHYME... but F-k! WHO CARES!

I haven't made up my mind about this little ditty yet! So before you delete it, I'm gonna quote you...

[nigel lawry]

now you have to finish it "h"

[olivejuice3]

hey h you dont have to rhmye to make a great poem...it can stand up on its own...i want to hear the finishedversion soon !

[nigel lawry]

nice one "H"  when are you gonna use the "space bar"

;D ...sorry could't resist it

peace

"A Bittersweet Morning " by H.H. :

I thought I was in love,  

but I was mislead  

by sexual desires  

I took for real feelings instead  

the raw passions

the obsessions with naked flesh

filled my senses, my taste, my touch

it all was just way too much

replacing human soul and mind

how could I have been so blind?

now I pray for the stars above  

for a chance to find a real love  

to walk out of this satin bed of desire

that I still can't help but admire  

but from which I must break away  

break away without a backward glance

to get a second chance

to find the path that I allready was on

all the nightmares... be gone  

I was lost but now I'm found  

and I on this route I'm taking,

I may be  bound  

in the closing ceremonies

when the curtain goes down,

to become this morning-play's clown....

H.H. 2004

[olivejuice3]

i really like this finished version...amazing how you have mastered the english language better than most english speaking people!

[nigel lawry]

i really like this finished version...amazing how you have mastered the english language better than most english speaking people!

katie's back..hunny were you beeen :D