Mystery On Wall Street

[Joniemack]

I've been looking at different sorts of poetic forms and found the concept of Concrete Poetry to be quite interesting. This one isn't great, but it's my first. (The board formatting doesn't really allow for some of the features I've given this)

Mystery on Wall Street

The stunning jaws of Heaven open

Forty floors up

All necks crane in synchrony

Freeze for a rapturous second

as a multitude of cash

ripples

flutters

slides

glides

sails

flaps

flies through the Plaza

God

jumps

plummets

pounds onto the pavement

without a witness

[jimharmon]

I'd consider the jaws of Hell rather than Heaven, I hope God didn't have anything to do with Wall streets Devilish deed!

But maybe that's just me!