Don't Let Me Do This To You

[EmilyCornelius]

Don't let me do this to you.

I can tear you in half.

Don't look at me like that.

It tells me all I need to know.

All I have to do is fake a smile

And tell a few lies.

I'm just here to take you

And break you.

And you'll be left here.

And I'll be up there.

Don't let me do this to you.

I will tear you in half.

[iidesu]

wow, touching!

[jackspaldingdavis]

As much as I love to write, I dont really know what I am talking about critically so I wont try and tell you whats good and whats bad.

What I will say is almost immediately I can relate to this poem. So if you are connecting with people through your words like that then your doing a good job.

Peace

[EmilyCornelius]

wow, touching!

Thank you

As much as I love to write, I dont really know what I am talking about critically so I wont try and tell you whats good and whats bad.

What I will say is almost immediately I can relate to this poem. So if you are connecting with people through your words like that then your doing a good job.

Peace

Thank you! I don't claim to be a critic, I'm far from it. I can only offer my opinions.

[coombs5200]

Usually not a fan of poems like this however i managed to connect to this one.

Good Job! x