Dont Think Twice It's Alright

[JrSteele]

Well I'll try to say as little about myself and leave the real words for the songs. Been playing guitar for about 6 years,riding my Harley about 6 as well, strange coincidence, always wrote songs for fun but never really thought anything of it. Thought I'd post some of my material up here and see what the masses have to say. All critiques are welcome, with the good comes the bad right? Dont currently have anything on youtube or any music on the internet but in the works of getting some of this stuff off paper and onto the computer. Happy Trails.

Bad Trip Chick

- I got this bad trip chick, yeah she's been putting me down

Speaking such evil words, everytime I come around

Gotta get rid of my ball and chain

I'm leaving town

See my .45, looking cold looking mean

Gonna load my bullets, aint leaving no evidence

Putting my bad chick down

6 feet in the ground

Made it to Canadian border, police on my trail

Running down a two way street

Will i live or will I die

Then again my father said

Only the good die young

Wreckless Ride

-Two lane, wide open way

Shifting gears I'm on my way

Onto what, I dont know

Gonna go where the cold wind takes me

Hitting the bars on my iron horse

Wasting away one tank at a time

Keeping rubber down and my motor high

Just trying to get where Im going

On this wreckless ride

The morning sun, following the night

Too many bottles, one too many fights

Asphalt trails and dirty looks

Let me be and just let me ride

Hitting the bars on my iron horse

Wasting away one tank at a time

Keeping rubber down and my motor high

Just trying to get where Im going

On this wreckless ride

My time will come thats sure enough

I wont resist it, just take it as it comes

But you can bet before I go

Ill be going out in fire and smoke

[MissMartha]

Bad Trip Chick is a potential gem I think. But this female needs to do more then "put you down" to deserve her fate. I'd say, make her a memory or even better, a mythological woman, maybe associated with Bike lore??? (if there isn't one you know of, make one up) Cause otherwise it would be easy to offend some chicks since it is so rough. But like the feel of the song a lot. I'd just say put more meat on it, more about the girl and why she needs to die. =) Keep it up, I'm interested.