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Gabriella

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About Gabriella

  • Rank
    Starting To Play
  • Birthday 09/16/1995

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  • Gender
    Female
  • Location
    Australia

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  • Songwriting Collaboration
    Interested With Written Agreement

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  1. First Time

    Thanks so much everyone I was really worried cause it's a very different style song to what I usually write (I've actually been writing for 10 years) and this positive response means a lot to me.
  2. First Time

    First Time We all have a first time Do we all have a last? Can you pinpoint a moment When the world turns so fast? We all have tomorrow We all have the sun We all need a hero Will you be my one? Who stands before me? Are you my queen? Will you pick me a flower? From this bright, shiny beam? Do you know who you are As you kiss me? Can you unravel the map That allows me to breathe? Can you unravel the map That allows me to breathe? Interlude We all have a stop Do we all have a start? Is the only end The stop of a heart? We all have a future We all have a dream I know you think That you belong to me Can you pierce me heart? Can you fill my lungs? I need a start I need to belong Can you strike a match? I need some light I don’t know if I have more fight We all have a first time Do we all have a last? Can you pinpoint a moment When the world turns so fast? We all have tomorrow We all have the sun We all need a hero Will you be my one? We all have a stop Do we all have a start? Is the only end The stop of a heart? We all have a future We all have a dream I know you think That you belong to me Interlude We all have these thoughts We all have these things Do you have a question A question for me? We all have a part We all have a piece Watch me unravel What ravels this Ma-ga-zine Interlude We all have a first time Do we all have a last? Can you pinpoint a moment When the world turns so fast?
  3. My Life Sucks (But I'll Enjoy My Day)

    I think you need the develop the idea more, at the moment it just feels whiney but I'm sure with a more developed story or arc it could be significantly improved.
  4. Thanks Neil, that means so much to me.
  5. Put a stone on my grave ‘Cause I will come back again Please collect my soul Before you go Put a stone on my grave I look forward to the day I get back home Oh don't you know Oh let me fall Come crash through your door I need your love Cause I'm broken up Can you fix my soul So you can let me go I am not a stone Because I will grow With all your love Do you have enough With all your love Do you have enough Put a stone on my grave ‘Cause I will come back again Please collect my soul Before you go Put a stone on my grave I look forward to the day I get back home Oh don't you know Interlude Come on now I have a beating heart You can hold my hand And then we start I am not a ghost Because I lost my soul But it will return To who I love the most Don't think I'm gone There is this song Just call my name And put a stone on my grave Put a stone on my grave ‘Cause I will come back again Please collect my soul Before you go Put a stone on my grave I look forward to the day I get back home Oh don't you know Oh will you please Release me from my dream Patch me up inside So I can face the time I'm scared I'm gonna fade Will you be the one I save I know I must Do I have enough Put a stone on my grave ‘Cause I will come back again Please collect my soul Before you go Put a stone on my grave I look forward to the day I get back home Oh don't you know
  6. Hello everyone, I've been writing lyrics and songs for years but I have found that my best piece of writing is the one written for a melody. I would love to emulate this quality song. It would be great if someone who wrote melodies would be willing to send me an mp3 of their work for me to write lyrics to. If you are interested in collaborating with me, please PM me and we can discuss how we want to collaborate.
  7. Looking For Lyricist And/or Singer (Paid)

    Hello, do you want English lyrics that are NOT a translation of the original? I could easily work with you to create a song using that melody to give it lyrics that could be as similar or as different from the original as you wish.
  8. Hey Everyone!

    Hello everyone, I'm Gabriella and I've been writing songs for about 7 years. I write lyrics on paper and the melody just in my head, unfortunately I can't sing, play an instrument or write music. I'd love to collaborate in any way, shape or form including writing lyrics to a melody, having a melody set to music and working with musicians willing to use my songs that do have a melody, just not one written down. I can't wait to get started properly on this site.
  9. Welcome to the forums Gabriella :)

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