[The Question]

I think you have a gift for rhyme and conveying emotion but I think it has been done so many times that's probably why you're not getting a good response.  

People don't want to be reminded of their weaknesses so you probably have reached a lot of people.  They just don't want to face their own demons.

 

My first published lyric was about addiction but it was one of those stories of hope even though it was very much like this one.  It dealt more with the spiritual aspect.  Not religion, but the question of not asking the right questions.  So, like you, I expressed my own guilt and self deprecation but kind of went deeper into why addiction is so hard to combat and how it breaks down the psyche until eventually the person doesn't care anymore.

 

Anyway, just my 2 cents.  

 

Very nice structure and rhyme!!

 

Bryan 

[I Love That I Hate]

Very nice write Rebel!!

 

You really captured a lot of emotion in this.

It makes me think of a lyric I wrote in another genre about being "thankful for a lota things I ain't got".

 

All the best,

 

Bryan

[It's Been A Fun First Year With Everyone At Songstuff]

Hey Peggy,

 

Sounds great!!  I wish you all the success you can find!!

It is always a pleasure to read your lyrics and now to soon be able to hear them will be awesome!!

 

Best of luck,

 

Bryan

[Blank - Performing For An Online Web Series]

Awesome song and performance Mahesh!!

 

Living the dream man!!  Kudos my friend.  Keep on doing what you feel!!

 

All the best,

Bryan

[A Question For Lyricists]

Doesn't anyone else cheat like I do???

 

I write my lyrics to other peoples music. LOL  That's how musically inclined I am.

I love music and it has influenced my life ever since I could listen to the radio but I couldn't make up my own tune if I had a gun held to my head.

 

I applaud all who can!!  If not for you people I would never have started writing.

 

All the best,

Bryan

[The Perching Of The Two Black Birds - Creative, Short-Essay]

Hey Boss,

 

Maybe this isn't getting any response because it really isn't a lyric.  You might try posting it on the poetry board or misc. 

 

I think you did a good job as far as an essay is concerned.

 

Bryan