[The Second Verse]

Hi, thanks for the tips.. I have done and will continue to use these ideas..

I have written many songs and most of them write themselfs. Maybe 1 out of 10 that gets me.. 

[The Second Verse]

Hi Tom, I also sing the melody out when I'm looking for the words. I often find, I have said all I want to say in the first verse and chorus.. I feel like I am rambling on a bit in the second..

 

What do you guys think about those songs, where the first verse is repeated?

For example

 

Oasis - Rock and Roll Star

Oasis - Live forever

 

I don't mean if you like the song or lyrics, more how a song flows when written this way.. Do you think it is lazy writing?

If you have other examples, please let me know..

[The Second Verse]

Hi Michael, Thanks for the tips.. I have used a verse from another one of my songs before.. I find it funny how some songs write themselfs and other make you suffer..LOL. I always like the ones that make you suffer more.

 

I really enjoyed your Untiled song on soundcloud and Born Free..

 

Here is the link to my soundcloud

 

https://soundcloud.com/william-mayos

 

Thanks

Will

[The Second Verse]

Hi, it is so nice to find a forum where I can read and talk about music.. When I write my songs, I sometimes find the second verse a pain to finish.

Has anyone got any tips they would like to share?

 

Thanks

 

All the best

 

Will