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thesong

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  1. thesong
    Pretty cool, man. The main thing that jumped at out me for changing is the bit about the mime in the second line. Because mimes are actually all about expression. They just don't make any sound.
  2. john

    Welcome to the forums thesong :)

    1. thesong

      Thanks, man.

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