Hello,
Thank you Ruby for your proposition, and thank you John, Steve and thelevellers.
I work on a project that I started to develop approximately 2 years ago....
-Getting Out Of The Darkness-
For the first song, of which I need lyrics,
Is the history of young children who are abused by multinationals in certain countries.
It's a Rock style --- Like U2, Pink Floyd etc....(It's my influence for this piece)
BPM... 65 to 75 (That will depend on the flow of the text)
Let's talk about the story...............
Children of cotton (It's not the title,and not a sugestion)
More particularly in India, over there, there are children from 12 to 17 years which work in the cotton fields.
The work conditions are terrible, they use poison in the fields as weedkiller.
This weedkiller which is provided by Turquis was withdrawn from the market in the years 1980
But they sell this poison over there, they removed the pictograms on the bottles, and the recommendations are not translated in their language.
More precisely people who make the war uses this product to manufacture bombs chemical
In the factories where cotton is transformed into clothing, the children are exposed to the chemicals. One of worst, the chlorine, which burns their eyes and quietly, they become blind.
These children are placed and nourished at the factory, a wardrobe of eight square feet can lodge from 3 to 5 children
In 2007, there are 6 times more children who suffer from cancer than there was in 2002, and all are caused by the products carcinogen used in the fields and these factories of transformation.
Each morning a train passes, from village in village, it goes to the city, where there are the hospitals.
People over there call this train, the train of death
the first which arrives will be the first...
chemotherapy
radiotherapy
And for sickest, they are lodged on the last floor where they die slowly without their family
Doctors over there, cry with the murders!
For the arrangement..........(I can imagine)
The song start with a bed of synth (Pad from a 1982 Memorymoog)
Maybe a little bit of the 1998 Etherwave Theremin
And in far left of the scene - A woman who improvise acapella without any words. Just humming Ahh---Hoo
Probably the mother of one of those chidren.
The intro will follow with acoustic guitar (picking) and soft piano chords, with the bed of synth
Chords will be easy to play.... at this part of the song
Gradualy, electric guitar, bass and drum will follow
The form of the piece can-being
Intro - Verse 1-2 -Chorus- Verses 3-4 -Chorus - Bridge and the final part (CODA)
All is debatable, its why i need your help
If you believe that you can make the lyrics for this song, do not hesitate let me know
I love you !
Carlos