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ImNobodyButMe

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  1. Rap I wrote about someone, any kind of feedback is appreciated, be honest please.

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    I cant stop starin'

    Your beauty is blarin'

    I try to look away

    But my eyes can't seem to go astray

    You look nice today

    Everyday, but no time to say

    Everytime I think of talkin'

    I take to long and you start walkin'

    Then I get nervous

    I start thinkin' what is my purpose

    A surplus of stupid curses

    No nurses can fix my hurtin'

    I just want us to be perfect

    At least thats my perspect

    But im broken

    I wanna talk to you but I start chokin'

    When I write I feel like my mind is a dictionary

    When I try to speak to you my mind is playin pictionary

    Now instead im stuck here writin' about a girl I see in the hallway

    I pray, some how we can meet one day

    Sounds cliche, but I'd bring you a bouquet, of flowers.

    I've fallen for you

    But im stallin' for me

    I cant be what I wanna be

    Sweep you off your feet

    No others can beat

    But I cant seem to reach that feat

    So I guess I did get beat,

    Damn

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