Rap I wrote about someone, any kind of feedback is appreciated, be honest please.
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I cant stop starin'
Your beauty is blarin'
I try to look away
But my eyes can't seem to go astray
You look nice today
Everyday, but no time to say
Everytime I think of talkin'
I take to long and you start walkin'
Then I get nervous
I start thinkin' what is my purpose
A surplus of stupid curses
No nurses can fix my hurtin'
I just want us to be perfect
At least thats my perspect
But im broken
I wanna talk to you but I start chokin'
When I write I feel like my mind is a dictionary
When I try to speak to you my mind is playin pictionary
Now instead im stuck here writin' about a girl I see in the hallway
I pray, some how we can meet one day
Sounds cliche, but I'd bring you a bouquet, of flowers.
I've fallen for you
But im stallin' for me
I cant be what I wanna be
Sweep you off your feet
No others can beat
But I cant seem to reach that feat
So I guess I did get beat,
Damn