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Hey guys I recently put out an instrumental project called Jointz###. Would mean alot if any of you could check it out and tell me if u dig it or not. Peace!
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The rhymes actually flow pretty neatly. For a beginner i would expect u to be stretching and shit, but nah the rhymes go well. Rhymes also dont have to be super complex, i like the simplicity of this as it contains alot of emotion. You get the message across well, which is what rhymes are meant to do in a song. Keep it up man would love to hear u in a audio drop. Peace
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You have a good voice for it i would say maybe add reverb a bit it sounds a tad dry on the chorus vocals.. make it a bit more dramatic.. but i dig the melody u got going with the voice and the hook overall is pretty good. The beat is dope also. But i hate it when ppl love the beat before myself so i left that until last haha. Keep it up bro
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Wow didnt expect so much feed! Great stuff guys.
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i think the flow and rapping is alright .. the video quality is well presented .. however, lay off the race shit man (well its up to u really) but being a white rapper really isnt a big deal these days.. especially when there are alot of succesful white rappers .. Also when making a joke like the dyslexic black girls comment lol, try and smile .. because i know u was joking about, but show us your not being serious.. keep it up man! .. RTF? Peacee
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not feeling the drums for a rap song.. but when the singer came in it kind of worked for her.. Your flow is cool it could be a bit tighter, im not a fan of repeating bars as much as u did.. try working on the lyrics! One could interpret repetition as lazyness or filler.. Keep it up and mix your verses better! reverb and compression and eq.. Keep it up RTF? Peaace..
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Success Ft. Tells (Also produced by Me) (Im on 1st and 2nd verse, tells on 3rd). PEaaace!
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pretty cool drum beat the snare has some snap to it.. the hats have a cool trap flavor (along with the snare roll) .. I feel maybe the actual instruments are too quiet.. turn everythng up or use a slight limiter on the master to squash it a tad (calm down mix engineers lol) .. Keep it up its good for a first timer! Peace . OUTSS.
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Not sure iif i like the synth sound it sounds a tad cheap.. The rapping has a good flow, there arent really bits where u struggle.. just sort out the voocals, they sound a bit boxy.. and muffled under the beat.. keep it up!! OUTSS.
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