jd73

My name's Jonathan. Looking to pick up some songwriting tips. Happy to give feedback on stuff too, as best I can.

^ That's ^ bleeping fantastic, thanks!

I'd definitely be interested in the melody-writing side of this. I don't have bags of experience but am looking to develop. Feel free to DM me (if that's possible here?)

Nice! Sounds very NiN to me. Music production's solid and vocals really work - I wish I could get that croaky sound with loads of fry. Can't always understand the lyrics but that's not a massive issue; I could understand enough and there was some pretty heavy imagery in there.I did find the little ticking hi-hat type thing a little distracting though. Maybe it needs to be a bit quieter?

Hi all. I've been experimenting with songwriting for a bit but there's always something missing. Whether it's a hooky melody or words that don't really seem to fit the subject, something always seems a bit ... crummy, like it could be significantly better. What things do people actively have to watch out for when writing lyrics, and how do you get around them? Thanks!