Stellarmystery

Hey guys^^ it's been a around a year since I've last posted in this site. Back then, it was songs but I am back with a poetry piece. I hope to know what you guys think about this short work of mine! Thank you guys for reading~ The wind blows, windows rattle The moon light shined veranda of my abode Time stooped by slowly steadily I stood before the soul less frame Wondering why he stood so plain Rising his stone flat grimace His head dropped I asked him, "What had you done? To stand with gore." Frightened at the sight he bore, I tugged my conscience recall. No longer could bare I punched the entity ahead. It broke, pieces shattered The shining silver reflector.

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❤️ Hey guys ❤️ I'm back with my second song. I decided to make it something comical, childish. Or it may have honestly just turned out like that. So please enjoy and state in the comments what I could improve in my song writing. ❤️ Bai~ (v1) I lie awake at midnight time 11:58 Alone Trying to peer into the darkness filled with eerie silence tik tik tok then came the loud sound from the old clock in the hall the clock had struck 12 and the little tiny bird appeared (Chorus) Time passes by quickly second by second minute by minute and now without realizing an hour had already passed by (v2) It is now 1AM And i'm still wide awake Struggling to process life Worrying about how to “step forward,” Between my thoughts I could hear the cats fighting in the near valleys Atleast they are fighting together But what am I doing? So useless huh (Chorus) Time passes by quickly second by second minute by minute and now without realizing 2 hours had already passed by (v3) It is now 3 AM and I'm surrounded by pitch black 3-4 in the morning is known as devils hour I can see the red eyes staring at me they must be wondering "what is wrong with this little girl" who has a whole life ahead of her unlike them I'm neither big nor smart SO I'd rather you not ask me (Chorus) Time passes by quickly second by second minute by minute and now without realizing 3 hours had already passed by (v4) It is now 6AM And I still had not slept I can now hear the roosters in my mind When I stayed in the countryside they woke me up daily Now I miss such pleasure and company What am I to do with life right now? (Chorus) Time passes by quickly second by second minute by minute and now without realizing 2 hours had already passed by (v5) It is now 8AM And I opened my eyes I realized That I was really never awake This whole time being awake at night was just a dream I got out off my bed And went to make a coffee while walking I was thinking "What a weird dream!"

❤️ Hey guys ❤️ This is my first ever song! I'm actually much more of a poet and short story writer and wanna check out my song writing skills. Please comment what you think especially since i'm a terrible singer 😢 I wanna name this song as either "Small bird in the huge tree" Or "Without you" Tell me which suits the song the best. (V1) You gave me strength to move on made me jolly out of this world You uplifted me took away my timid self (yeah) You made me SO bright SO happy SO merry That sometimes I wondered if this was me You made me open up So much it was frightening and sometimes I wonder though if this was fake if this was just a bet with you and your friends cause I aint no fun and you were just playing with me messing in my head And if you really wanna be friends with this nobody..(nobody) (chorus) Without you I would still be that small bird in that huge tree Which expanded northwest (V2) I would still be gazing at the sun east Alone With no body true With mixed emotions You should know I have been betrayed before By people I care But you.....came along Mending my little broken heart By letting me tag along With you and your friends friends who became close with me in an instant And I knew I belong You made sure those people wont approach me ever again But you know I felt so tired then (chorus) Without you I would still be that small bird in that huge tree Which expanded northwest (V3) Now that we go on our own paths now I realize The strength you've given me You made me a little more confident Little more beautiful Pretty... You gave me the strength To become who I am now Without you I would have a been a lonely little kid Who sat alone by himself With no body around (V4) Without you I would have been nothing I wanna thank you for everything cause Now in this time and phase When we don't meet I realized I miss you I want to meet you But will we..? meet up soon will you spare me some time? Will you enjoy my company? I wonder (wonder) (wonder) (chorus) Without you I would still be that small bird in that huge tree Which expanded northwest (v5) Without you I feel sad I wanna meet you.. but Right now I can only do one thing I wanna tell you Whats in my heart A secret for my special somebody Whose been by my side this whole whole whole time "Without you I would still be that small bird in that huge tree Which expanded northwest"

❤️ Hello ❤️ I start a little hobby of song writing that I honestly have never done before and I wanted to receive opinions about it. Honestly i'm not used to writing songs, i'm much better at writing stories and poems. So I wish to become better at this with time! ❤️ Thanks for reading this if you did! ❤️