man made material

hey folks! as a newbie, I'm figuring out forum etiquette, but I guess before commenting on other peoples and to give you an idea of what I'm up to, the first thing I should do, is throw myself at you mercy and see where it goes from there? so here's my newest track, it's my 11th composition, my first being in May last year... it feels like I'm making some progress, but I could do with some honest feedback to get an idea of just how much I'm deluding myself!😁 anyway, here goes... all comments welcome! https://soundcloud.com/user-751019866/truth-and-lies

Hi folks, just joined, so I thought I better introduce myself... l've always had a passion for music and last summer I found myself with some time on my hands and so thought I'd make use of it by trying to write songs - i got myself a bit of kit, and Reason as a DAW and flung myself at it... I think i'm beginning to figure some stuff out, but really looking forward to picking everyone's brains on here... cheers!