Hey there, so about two days ago I thought of writing a letter of encouragement using only positive words. I'm directing it toward a general audience and I do plan to read this over music so it does have a little rhythmic element to it, but Im not strict on the number of words and syllable count. Trying to keep the focus on the message as much as possible.
I don't have a lot of experience with writing so I'm kind of winging it as I go. I will post what I have so far, below. Nothing is set in stone and I continue to revisit and rewrite, so if you have any suggestions, Im all ears! Let me know if you think it's heading in the right direction or not? Maybe some tips or articles you know of that I could read and apply to my own writing?
Anyway, thank you for your time!
Ken
Title : You’re Beautiful
Verse 1: (with background music)
The way I would describe you, is beautiful
You’re creative and original, there’s no one like you
I admire your love for your family, you always show up for your friends
You never tire, you’re unselfish, you care deeply
Like a warm fire on a cold night
Your love and acceptance draws us closer
Like tiny streams of cool water running down a mountain slope
You quench our minds and give us hope for the future
You’re a great friend and a fierce ally
These are more than words, you're more than a friend
You’re beautiful
(Goes into Melodic hook)
Verse 2: (with background music)
The way I would describe you, is beautiful
You’re very special to me and I care about you
I want you to have all the happiness, joy and love that life can bring
I know its not all rainbows and unicorns, it gets challenging
Let my words quench your thirst,
Like a tropical rainstorm in the African desert.
Let all your doubts disappear like embers into the night
Gather yourself around good thoughts, feel its warmth, let it inspire
You, your family, your friends, your community
You’ve got heart, you’re unstoppable
You’ve got the skills, you’re [ undisputable? Indisputable? ]
You’re beautiful
(Goes into Melodic hook)