manousche

Hi ! I'm french and I wrote this song in english so I'd like to know if it's correct and what you think about it. It's called "WHITE FLOWERS" You were young, almost as ruthless as an animal. During the summer you even went totally wild. But when autumn came you were looking for something better. In an old tavern, you heard about white flowers. In the deepests forests, the young trees always want some sun, But they grow up and later, by the sun, their sap burns. When your leaves came falling down, then you began to be good. There's a rare flower that only blooms from dying wood. We're now roaming in Dying Woods. There's a wolf in the woods and he wants your blood. Locked in the woods but he's coming soon. Give him your blood or a white flower in bloom. Merci pour votre attention !

Bonjour à tous ! I'm manousche and I'm 28 years old. I play guitar for a long time, and trumpet too. I'm french as you can see, and I don't speak english very well. Though, I decided to write songs in english because I think it sounds really better, and my musical culture is more english or american than french (Radiohead, Chokebore, Tom Waits, Cake). So I came here to meet some english or american people, and I hope I will improve my english level. If anyone needs some help to traduce something to french, or from french, I can help him of course. A bientôt, manousche