jackspaldingdavis
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As much as I love to write, I dont really know what I am talking about critically so I wont try and tell you whats good and whats bad. What I will say is almost immediately I can relate to this poem. So if you are connecting with people through your words like that then your doing a good job. Peace
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Any opinions/critique on this would be helpful. This is the first "poem" I have ever written. I mean alot of my songs could be poems but i've never started writing with the intention of poetry before. The texture of everything, skin and wood from touching glove hands to bearing books And I can feel, so short, so sweet relief of minds which overheat Hands which linger around a waist a silent stroke, a lustful taste In our arms, we are displeased we lack protection, shaking knees We're over, come and compensate 7 days too long to wait With fingers out and fingers in a sudden urge in ashy dim light and fire, heads and bone softly spoken words of stone
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howdy....I'm jack.....I really like music.......so much so that i listen to my iPod on the loo..........
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