ivn08

To start things off, I live in a small town in the state of California. For those who don't know, it is in the United States ; ) The thngs is, living in a small town means that everyone knows everything about anyone, usually. Though, my ability to write lyrics isn't well-known, not yet. I send my work to get responses on them, where I can improve, what communicates better, and such. I signed up for this website because I feel I have much more to give, and I know I can achieve my full potential from those much more experienced than I. So, I would greatly appreciate any replies on my lyrics, because I am always looking for ways to improve them. Any input is appreciated as well. Thank you!