Unforgiven

[nigel lawry]

another new one

Unforgiven

Sorry I let you down

Guess I was born a clown

Just don’t think it was on purpose

Right now my life’s a circus

Going round in circles

Falling at all the hurdles

Trying to keep the demons away

Seems like a hard price to pay

I don’t fear the grim reaper

Sometimes I even rush to greet her

Sometimes I just hide away

Waiting for a brighter day

Somebody hand me the final bill

Can’t take much more I feel Ill

Gotta find a way to be strong

And undo all I done wrong

Copyright ©2004 Nigel Lawry

[Steve]

A sombre tone to this one Nigel! I love this verse

I don’t fear the grim reaper

Sometimes I even rush to greet her

Sometimes I just hide away

Waiting for a brighter day

Making the grim reaper a female is quite brilliant! And I'm surprised that I've never come across this before. Well done son...

[nigel lawry]

A sombre tone to this one Nigel! I love this verse

I don’t fear the grim reaper

Sometimes I even rush to greet her

Sometimes I just hide away

Waiting for a brighter day

Making the grim reaper a female is quite brilliant! And I'm surprised that I've never come across this before. Well done son...

cheers steve

i figured if women can claim god is female then they can have the whole package

nigel

[Rudi]

This subject matter seems a something of a theme for you Nigel. One of you must have been a heartbreaker.

I agree with you both about the GReaper. Satan is the next obvious gender bender huh?

[Alistair]

I like it a lot for the same reasons as Steve and Rudi

and I think it could be even better if you worked on the 2nd verse which is ordinary compared to the others

The circus / purpose rhyme is f***ing A!

[nigel lawry]

This subject matter seems a something of a theme for you Nigel. One of you must have been a heartbreaker.

I agree with you both about the GReaper. Satan is the next obvious gender bender huh?

thanx rudi

guess we are all heartbreakers some how..

and who told you that satan WAS a man???

[nigel lawry]

I like it a lot for the same reasons as Steve and Rudi

and I think it could be even better if you worked on the 2nd verse which is ordinary compared to the others

The circus / purpose rhyme is f***ing A!

thanx al

did u like the clown-circus reference....

your correct mate i got stuck/lazy at second verse

but had to make a connection from ...demons to the grim reaper

will slap my wrist and try harder mate..

peace

[Nightwolf]

This one's cool